I really enjoyed your comic. It has your essence, a typical reaction that you will have if you will get stuck in that kind of situation, hahaha. Besides, I like the way as you represent our culture using a commun colombian expression and how you did a synthesized job, but complete. Great job!
I understand how difficult it's to create the characters, but I would suggest something more characteristic for the next time, maybe a detail; a hat, a flower, things like this could make it simple but creative.
The scene you've chosen is a wonderful one. It has potential. In that moment, it would have been awesome if you had put the mistrust and shrewdness that defines our way to interact with others instead of followed them, perhaps, you could have created a different way to scape.
By the other hand, I liked what you did with the common expression, those that are used in normal life and not those ones that stereotype our culture. I think that keeping it simple was the perfect way to say "hey, we're not so different" even if we are.
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ReplyDeleteHello, Pao. :]
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your comic. It has your essence, a typical reaction that you will have if you will get stuck in that kind of situation, hahaha. Besides, I like the way as you represent our culture using a commun colombian expression and how you did a synthesized job, but complete. Great job!
Hello, Paola.
ReplyDeleteI understand how difficult it's to create the characters, but I would suggest something more characteristic for the next time, maybe a detail; a hat, a flower, things like this could make it simple but creative.
The scene you've chosen is a wonderful one. It has potential. In that moment, it would have been awesome if you had put the mistrust and shrewdness that defines our way to interact with others instead of followed them, perhaps, you could have created a different way to scape.
By the other hand, I liked what you did with the common expression, those that are used in normal life and not those ones that stereotype our culture. I think that keeping it simple was the perfect way to say "hey, we're not so different" even if we are.
Valentina Quiroga Ballesteros.
Paola, the idea was to tell the story including yourselves in it. I don´t see in the instruction that you were to only represent one scene.
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